If you think about it, humans just
took over the land on this Earth and claimed it as their own. That’s pretty
much what countries are- land that was taken over by humans who created ways to
control the people who live there. Human
relations were needed for all that and it is essential for our survival. There isn’t anything wrong with patriotism, in
fact I think it’s great and it unites people but when it comes down to when you
have a problem, it’s better to have a personal connection with people. The government can’t solve all your problems
or have sympathy for you.
The government is supposed to help
citizens but people have personal problems and may want opinions and advice from other people.
A country won’t care about a problem like that, unless you have a huge group of
people to back you up and they still won’t treat you with the same kind of care
as a friend would. Trying to ask the
government what you should wear on the weekend is something that they cant help
you with and only people you are close to and talk to on a daily basis can.
Patriotism unifies a nation but
that doesn’t mean it unifies the people. A person can be patriotic and love
their country dearly but they can still be antisocial at the same time. This is
because they aren’t united with a group of people who bonds with them. They would just have a lonely life, and have
no one to share the benefits of this country and the joys of life with. Having a personal relationship with people
benefits our mental health. If you are lonely and spend all your time alone,
you can put yourself in a dangerous place of thinking thoughts that could affect
your mental health. Yeah you could have a deep love for your country, but
patriotism doesn’t give you that kind of love and care humans crave and need.
In conclusion, human relations are
more valuable than having a pride in your homeland. Without human relations, then everyone and
their parents (and so on) wouldn’t have been born and we would not be here
right now. Having a good life has to do with sharing amazing and fun experiences
with the people you know and love which is something patriotism cannot grant
you.
I enjoyed reading your essay. I really liked your hook it caught my attention.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I love your blog, Nice design! I really like your hook, and what you said about human just taking over the land and how you compared government/ patriotism as a friend you would ask " what should I wear. great job, easily understood explanation.
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